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Birds of a Feather: Prologue


It was the most exciting time in Addy's life. Here she was, on her way to Neo City, the mecca for anmans of all shapes and sizes. It was the only place in the Nation where an anman could actually make something of themselves, and truly enrich their lives.

As her little Nissan sped along, she couldn't help but gleefully smile. The excitement was in full force. Ever since she was little she dreamt of becoming a model. To her, the body is a beautiful thing, a work of art even, because no two in the world are the same. That is to say, each one is unique. She felt by becoming a model she would be able to inspire others to love the way they looked instead of disliking it or even being ashamed of it.

As she entered the city limits she stopped at Angel Vista, one of The Neo City District's beauty spots. Here she could see the three cities, of Riverfeld, Neo City, and Thomason. She parked her car and stepped out to admire the three cities' glowing lights and night life.  She placed her hand on her chest and sighed a happy sigh,
"Made it." she said softly.

As she drove into the passes around Riverfeld, she stopped at a gas station to refuel. When she entered the mini-mart the attendant took a double take, He has never seen girl built quite like Addy before. Addy when to the fountain and mixed a couple sodas into one cup. She then went and picked up a milky-way candy bar, all the while the attendants was staring at her with his mouth wide open. She approached the counter to make her purchase and the attendant re-gained his composer. He made the transaction like he would any other only his eyes kept looking down at Addy. She took a sip of her drink mix and looked at the attendant. He couldn't help but blush.

"Excuse me, she said, "I'm not from around here. Can you tell me the quickest way to get to Neo city?" The attendant lifted his gaze and looked out the window motioning with his hand.
"Continue down this winding road here and follow it until you hit Greene Street then turn right and head North West on it. Greene Street runs through Riverfeld and Neo City, all the way to Beach City." said the flustered man. Addy smiled.
"OOH, thank you so much!" she said happily. Addy then took her purchase and left leaving the attendant in a daze.

"What a woman." he said to himself.
the prolouge

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theskender2 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015
I NEED MORE AWSOME STORY WRITING FROM YOU X3
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
well the wait will be over soon
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:icontheskender2:
theskender2 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
Excited :excited: WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!can't wait
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GeneStarwolf Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My buddies and I came across this while we were drinking and made a dramatic reading of it while we were drinking. Interested in hearing it even though this is old as hell now? LOL. ALSO I write at least one Addy fan-story. I will of course give you credit for th character and such.
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megamanfan43 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Its sounds very nice, please continue.
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Galen1 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Hmmmm... It seems in NemesisPrimes' universe the flat breast gene no longer exits in any dna. It also seems like the big breast gene is dominant in all dna.
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Afrodisium Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011
Awesome character design. :) I have a blue bird character named Ayleen. Not as busty, of course. :)
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
lol cool
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:iconwhitechimera:
WHITEChimera Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
Well written, where do you plan to take it?
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
it's a full on short story I just haven't shown much more of it
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:iconfragesed:
Fragesed Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011
AWESOME
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:iconzanpaktoukito:
zanpaktouKITO Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
nice story.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thank you
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:iconbraffzackland:
BraffZackland Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Will the comic be purchasable? Or simply free view?
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
there will be hard copies

a total of 4-5 books

in graphic novel format
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:iconbraffzackland:
BraffZackland Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Nice.
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Magik-Rat Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Okay, the big boobs subject aside, I really like the story. It's well written, and i'd like to read more. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, however. You might want to get that checked out.
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Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thanks you for your comment
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GypsySquid Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011   General Artist
Ah, coolness. This shows promise: While there's a little bit of spell-check needed and some word choice that could be better tweaked (e.g. fixing some redundancy), it's pretty cute and seems like it'll be both a lot of fun yet with a serious side. Looking forward to more. ^_^
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
thanks dude
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GypsySquid Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011   General Artist
Any time. ^^
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:iconbig--cee:
Big--Cee Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
Not. Too. Shabby.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
glad you like it
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:icondboomhauer:
DBoomhauer Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
Haters gonna hate.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
yup
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:icondboomhauer:
DBoomhauer Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
But no hate from me, your art is why I watch you.
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tailsrulz Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
You'd probably be better posting this on a place like Furaffinity if you at least want comments that aren't destructive/bawwwwing. DA is full of narrow-minded elitist kids who think anime is the greatest thing ever made and lose their minds when they see a fetishist furry picture on "their" front page. If anything, take comfort in that you have been able to rile up so many people just by posting a picture.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
indeed funny thing is 8/10 didn't even bother to read the story
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:iconshamoosh:
shamoosh Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Blue tit.
You're doing it wrong.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
do what now?
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x-Sphallolalia-x Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just want to know how she even fits into a car.

And, y'know, hasn't died because of those 50 pound bazonkas.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
well I'll be drawing that soon, so you will see just how she sits in her car
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x-Sphallolalia-x Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hit the wrong button, reading your story I found a bit of redundancy,some spelling and grammatical errors, but otherwise it was pretty well written.
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Darkundertaker Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
Seriously, most of these comments are just distasteful. Yeah he has a large chested characters, it is something called a kink.You know like how a lot of people seem to like futas, older/younger partners, disfigurements and the like. He asked for critique, not to be an ass.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
sometimes it's like talking to a brick wall
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Playcircus Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yeah, kinks: futas, older/younger partners, disfigurements and the like. All the bizarre things you deserve to be made fun of for for posting on a public site.
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Darkundertaker Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
lol
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:iconsleepybirdie:
SleepyBirdie Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
that no don look like bewbs at all....
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
you might want to practice on your grammar..just a tad
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:iconsleepybirdie:
SleepyBirdie Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011
actually i did that on purpose..

'that doesn't look like boobs at all' XD
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
not to be a grammar Nazi, but the correct way to say that would've been "Those do not (or don't) look like boobs at all."
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:iconsleepybirdie:
SleepyBirdie Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
okie dokie mister OuO
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:iconqueen-soulia:
Queen-Soulia Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it is lovely, amazing choice of image. I love a girl with huge breast so ignore the haters. ^-^
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
or at the very least have some fun.

the nay sayers don't bother me
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:iconqueen-soulia:
Queen-Soulia Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
BAH , let the trolls scream and shout, let us come with all our might, perhaps even 300 large breasted spartan females.
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
300 busty spartans...

*tosses into the idea book*
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:iconqueen-soulia:
Queen-Soulia Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*slowmotion run , giant breast bouncing*
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Zack Snyder would approve
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:iconqueen-soulia:
Queen-Soulia Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap:
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:iconneme303:
Neme303 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
and his over use of real time shots will be suddenly acceptable
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