Am I still Beautiful?

Here is one special waitress at the restaurant, Pom Poms.

Her Name, is Micha but known to her friends as "Mike"

The reason for her being so special (to me), is her history. Micha always was a cheerful and happy little fox, but she grew up in a predominately Human town in the mid-west. and That's where she was changed.

Upon going to High school Micha was eager to make new friends, so Naturally, the logical step for her bubbly personality was to become a cheerleader. Upon trying out the current roster was very impressed with her fun and charismatic nature. She quickly became popular amongst the other cheerleaders and was having the best time of her life, she had friends, and she was happy.

This however, bothered the head cheerleader, a human girl who didn't like being out shined by anyone, especially by a "furry". After months of being dwarfed by the kind and gentle Micha, the girl had snapped.

One day after cheer practice she trapped Micha in a bathroom stall and pulled out a razor. She was going to deal with her "problem" She stood over Micha and said a few words.

"It is written that Man shall have dominion over all beasts, and you need to learn your place!"

with these famous last words, she carved Micha's face and left her bleeding on the bathroom floor.

After this incident, Micha was never the same. She dropped off the cheer leading squad, too scared of her own shadow or what the head cheerleader would do to her if she stayed, or dared tell anyone what happened.

She eventually graduated and made a run for Neo City, the one place in the US where anmans out number humans.

here she is currently enrolled at the community college, and works the night shift at pom poms because some say her scars may scare customers.

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This was a practice at new techniques in Sai and I would very much like a critique

Thanks in advance